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Why did you love, when....

Why did you love, when....

“Please Leave Me!” she said, leaving be baffled and wrecked in tears. According to my dreams, our relation was destined to meet a joyful end but who was I kidding; not all dreams come true.

“Why do you love someone if one day you have to leave that person aghast and alone?” I think these days. “Why do you make promises and foresee future with dreamy eyes if you have to shatter the castle of dreams in future anyhow?”

The spiteful irony of life; when I thought she was the reason behind my smile, she turned out to be villainous in the end. 


This post has been written for Lillie McFerrin Writes - Five Sentence Fiction.
This week's word: Villainous.


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Deboshree
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February 5, 2015 at 5:00 PM delete

A love story that could have been...sigh. Well written. :)

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Ranu
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February 5, 2015 at 10:35 PM delete

The outcome is sad.

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February 6, 2015 at 2:31 AM delete

I enjoyed this, I am curious to know more.

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Aseem
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February 7, 2015 at 5:19 AM delete

Ahh the trials and tribulations of love :(.

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David
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February 12, 2015 at 2:42 PM delete

It certainly captures the feeling of rejection.

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Barbara
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February 12, 2015 at 8:47 PM delete

Ah, love. We'll never know why. So many emotions and then emptiness. :(

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Pawan Verma
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February 16, 2015 at 3:26 PM delete

Harsh Truth, :(
Well Written.

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Anmol Rawat
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March 20, 2015 at 10:48 PM delete

Some stories are meant to remain incomplete I guess :) Thank you.

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Anmol Rawat
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March 20, 2015 at 10:49 PM delete

It is, most of the times :)

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Anmol Rawat
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March 20, 2015 at 10:49 PM delete

Thank you Mary :)
Open to your imagination I'll say.

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ruchi2312
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June 1, 2015 at 10:44 PM delete

I love 5 fiction sentences. A good one! Keep writing!

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